2011년 1월 10일 월요일

Writing chain by Joon

My first Essay

Hello my name is Choi, Joon-Hyuk.I'm going to tell you guys about my writing chain.

Once upon a time there was a prince called Peter, and in France there was a princess called Jenny. Peter loved her so much that he send her mail everyday. However, Jenny was actually a witch disguised in a princess. Peter got angry and sent military to dominate France. 2years later, England dominated France.Prince started to hunt every witches in France, but the princess -disguised witch was never caught. Prince heard that the evil witch went to China, so he took Marco Polo with him for the guidance to China. Even though he was expert traveling to China ,since he got so old ,he forgot the route to go China.He guided prince to Korea by crossing Russia.Prince believed him and found the Jenny the witch at there. However he just ate kimchi.Like that, princess Jenny and prince Peter fought all over the Earth tring to find and tring to get away. But one day Peter just gave up and the king had a welcoming ceremony for the prince.The ceremony? A dnace party! The crowd was going extremely wid and especially,Peter. He danced with English girls,French girls ,Chinese girls, and even Korean girls.But one of the girls he liked was English girl named Jemma.Actually she Jemma was Jenny in disguise! Jenny knew he was prince Peter, but she just wanted keep him happy before the end of the party. At the end of the party, she was planning to take the prince underneath the chandelier.and when she go away to get a drink it would drop.So Jenny took the prince under the chandelier and asked him for a drink.than she dropped it on him.With the prince dead Jenny lived happily ever after.But one of prince's servant went to the underworld to and asked Hades for the resurection stone, and Hades said "If you want to have the resurection stone you have to fight and kill Medussa, but be carefull if you see her eyes you will turn into the stone. and the stone is in her eyes so take it "and he killed Medussa and got resurection stone and ran to the prince and put it into his mouth. prince was alive! than the prince had war with France and won so he lived happily ever after     

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